Wednesday, July 3, 2013

Dedication

To my Rescuer
I dedicate these thanks.
And as token of my gratitude
I offer you my time
For you have given me eternity.

5 comments:

  1. Hmm. I like. Something to ponder on throughout my day.

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  2. Eva, these are beautiful. Have you ever submitted any to the New Era or Ensign? I love them.

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  3. I love the rhythm of this poem. It's almost like iambic ____meter

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  4. Good idea, Gabrielle! Eva, you should definitely submit this one. Every word is beautiful -

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  5. Brigham, there are two lines of iambic pentameter, two lines of iambic trimeter, and one line of... I can't remember from my literature class. I need to review rhythmic scanning!

    Eva this is beautiful, as always.

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